Directions: First, copy and paste the sentences below onto your DOL page. Second, work with your DOL partner to correct the sentences.
DOL 1: NA
DOL 2: NA
DOL 3
Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
Corrected
1. Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe no one should have any practice.
Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
Corrected
2 . To ensure success, the management should require the project-the ones doing the experiment- to have new lab equipment.
DOL 4
Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
Corrected
1. Darnel does not have any reason to question them about the instructions but he does want an explanation for this exam.
Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project
Corrected
2. Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks for class and long term project.
DOL 5
Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
Corrected
1. Yes, Terri won the game, but at that time, we didn't know that she had won.
Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
Corrected
2. The program cancellation's effect, which bothered most of us members, was ending the project before we could finish it.
DOL 6
Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
Corrected
1. Because you should have heard their voice when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.
Corrected
1. Since you have heard their voice when I told them how their vacation time would have been affected.
Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
Corrected
2. Regardless of what grandpa says, it'll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration.
DOL 7
Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us
Corrected
1. Rob commented that we neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood.
Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
Corrected
2. Neither Ben nor I, since we have not read the assignment, knew the definition of the world "chide."
DOL 8
Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
Corrected
1. Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard. I'm sure he will see a lot of action in today's game.
Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
Corrected
The race between the three relay teams was close; none of the three, however, is giving up hope of winning.
DOL 9
Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world
Corrected
1. Ms. Perez, the science teacher, stated, "Within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity."
Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners
Corrected
2. Yesterday, Mom told us that whoever borrowed her new sweater has to take it to the cleaners.
DOL 10
Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
Corrected
1. Our social studies teacher, asked us to write down reports on the South with emphasis on African Americans.
Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
Corrected
Well, I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert.
DOL 11
Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
Corrected
1. My older sister, who is going to live in the new East town apartments, wants your help moving in Tonite.
Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
Corrected
2. At the end of her speech, Amanda said "if you need farther information, don't hesitate to ask me."
DOL 12
Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
Corrected
1. Having read the novel, The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
Corrected
2. Because there were so many things to do, I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, or go to my friend's concert.
DOL 13
Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
Corrected
1. Mr. Guarino told us that the Twenty-fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II, helped maintain peace in that country.
Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip
Corrected
2. Having finished her foreign trip, Stella requested a plane ticket to the United States.
DOL 14
Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia
Corrected
1. "I have reviewed the book really well; I received a good grade on the report," said Sonia.
Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted
Corrected
2. "Although we had 25 inches of snow last winter, the bushes appear to be all right," Pedro noted.
DOL 15
Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
Corrected
1. He was, incidentally, unable to attend our fifteenth high school reunion because he lives too far away.
Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
Corrected
2. It says that, regardless of the effect of poor weather, the Shakespearean play Romeo and Juliet will be sold out.
DOL 16
Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
Corrected
1. You should have followed three steps: fist, open the hood, second, check the level, and last, add more oil.
Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together
Corrected
2. Although my dog is different than yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.
DOL 17
Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
Corrected
1. Does Caroline know whether Ravl might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 P.M. or was he out of student government?
Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are eisting
Corrected
2. There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.
DOL 18
Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding
Corrected
1. Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the speeding car.
Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here
Corrected
2. After the race began, Delia took these medals to the track club at school located on the east side.
DOL 19
Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
Corrected
1. "Nothing could be further from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "than your comments."
Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early
Corrected
2. She was quite young-- no more than twenty-six she earned her doctorate consequently, she began her career early.
DOL 20
Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
Corrected
1. Yes, they are going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican.
Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports
Corrected
2. This car, a 1966 Mustang is now extremely valuable, regardless of what TV shows classical cars report.
DOL 21
Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
Corrected
1. Because it snowed heavily last night, it's all right if no one comes to basketball practice.
Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
Corrected
2. They mentioned that on January 2, 2000, this building was seventy-five years old.
DOL 22
Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
Corrected
1. Follow some simple rules and you will succeed: listen in class, doing your homework, and learn as much as possible.
Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated
Corrected
2. "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be more challenging." Martina stated.
Directions: First, copy and paste the sentences below onto your DOL page. Second, work with your DOL partner to correct the sentences.
DOL 1: NA
DOL 2: NA
DOL 3
Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
Corrected
1. Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe no one should have any practice.
Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
Corrected
2 . To ensure success, the management should require the project-the ones doing the experiment- to have new lab equipment.
DOL 4
Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
Corrected
1. Darnel does not have any reason to question them about the instructions but he does want an explanation for this exam.
Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project
Corrected
2. Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks for class and long term project.
DOL 5
Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
Corrected
1. Yes, Terri won the game, but at that time, we didn't know that she had won.
Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
Corrected
2. The program cancellation's effect, which bothered most of us members, was ending the project before we could finish it.
DOL 6
Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
Corrected
1. Because you should have heard their voice when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.
Corrected
1. Since you have heard their voice when I told them how their vacation time would have been affected.
Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
Corrected
2. Regardless of what grandpa says, it'll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration.
DOL 7
Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us
Corrected
1. Rob commented that we neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood.
Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
Corrected
2. Neither Ben nor I, since we have not read the assignment, knew the definition of the world "chide."
DOL 8
Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
Corrected
1. Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard. I'm sure he will see a lot of action in today's game.
Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
Corrected
The race between the three relay teams was close; none of the three, however, is giving up hope of winning.
DOL 9
Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world
Corrected
1. Ms. Perez, the science teacher, stated, "Within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity."
Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners
Corrected
2. Yesterday, Mom told us that whoever borrowed her new sweater has to take it to the cleaners.
DOL 10
Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
Corrected
1. Our social studies teacher, asked us to write down reports on the South with emphasis on African Americans.
Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
Corrected
Well, I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert.
DOL 11
Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
Corrected
1. My older sister, who is going to live in the new East town apartments, wants your help moving in Tonite.
Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
Corrected
2. At the end of her speech, Amanda said "if you need farther information, don't hesitate to ask me."
DOL 12
Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
Corrected
1. Having read the novel, The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
Corrected
2. Because there were so many things to do, I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, or go to my friend's concert.
DOL 13
Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
Corrected
1. Mr. Guarino told us that the Twenty-fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II, helped maintain peace in that country.
Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip
Corrected
2. Having finished her foreign trip, Stella requested a plane ticket to the United States.
DOL 14
Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia
Corrected
1. "I have reviewed the book really well; I received a good grade on the report," said Sonia.
Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted
Corrected
2. "Although we had 25 inches of snow last winter, the bushes appear to be all right," Pedro noted.
DOL 15
Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
Corrected
1. He was, incidentally, unable to attend our fifteenth high school reunion because he lives too far away.
Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
Corrected
2. It says that, regardless of the effect of poor weather, the Shakespearean play Romeo and Juliet will be sold out.
DOL 16
Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
Corrected
1. You should have followed three steps: fist, open the hood, second, check the level, and last, add more oil.
Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together
Corrected
2. Although my dog is different than yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.
DOL 17
Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
Corrected
1. Does Caroline know whether Ravl might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 P.M. or was he out of student government?
Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are eisting
Corrected
2. There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.
DOL 18
Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding
Corrected
1. Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the speeding car.
Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here
Corrected
2. After the race began, Delia took these medals to the track club at school located on the east side.
DOL 19
Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
Corrected
1. "Nothing could be further from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "than your comments."
Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early
Corrected
2. She was quite young-- no more than twenty-six she earned her doctorate consequently, she began her career early.
DOL 20
Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
Corrected
1. Yes, they are going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican.
Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports
Corrected
2. This car, a 1966 Mustang is now extremely valuable, regardless of what TV shows classical cars report.
DOL 21
Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
Corrected
1. Because it snowed heavily last night, it's all right if no one comes to basketball practice.
Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
Corrected
2. They mentioned that on January 2, 2000, this building was seventy-five years old.
DOL 22
Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
Corrected
1. Follow some simple rules and you will succeed: listen in class, doing your homework, and learn as much as possible.
Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated
Corrected
2. "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be more challenging." Martina stated.